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I've listed this article for peer review because i feel that this article is concise and complete in every respect. I am aiming for a FA status and hence i'm submitting this article for a peer review, so that i can get some feedback and suggestion which wud help in getting it to FA status...Thanks Gprince007 (talk) 17:46, 26 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Matthewedwards (talk · contribs)

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  • Change the lead to
"This is a list of episodes of Lizzie McGuire, a television comedy series broadcast on the Disney Channel, an American satellite and cable network aimed at children. [[Lizzie McGuire originally aired from....."

That way, the lead sentence is bolded correctly, the wikilinking of the title is done correctly, and you're providing context to the reader in regards to Disney Channel, and mirrors other FLs. Done Gprince007 (talk) 14:59, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Until I can see what the page looks like with the above changes, that's all I have for now. -- αŁʰƏЩ @ 00:51, 28 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Just to clarify, as a list, this can not become a FA, but it can become a WP:FL (going through the WP:FLC process). Ruhrfisch ><>°° 01:29, 28 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]