Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Media Forest most-broadcast songs of the 2010s in Romania/archive1
List of Media Forest most-broadcast songs of the 2010s in Romania[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to bring it to Featured List status sometime soon. I would like to receive some feedback about what needs to be fixed (structure, etc). Many thanks, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:53, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
MaranoFan[edit]
- I would recommend archiving all of the references.
- "the top ten most broadcast Romanian and foreign songs on Romanian radio stations and television channels" - So by my understanding, no songs are excluded? Then this whole bit can be replaced with "the top ten most broadcast songs on Romanian radio stations and television channels".
- In FLs, people seem to prefer active voice over passive. I can imagine the second sentence being rewritten as "The charts consider data from eight radio stations—Digi FM, Europa FM, Kiss FM, Magic FM, Pro FM, Radio ZU, Radio România Actualități and Virgin Radio Romania—and five television channels—1 Music Channel, Kiss TV, MTV Romania, UTV Romania and ZU TV".
- Remove the word "has" in the sentence about Shoulda by Jamie Woon.
- " this feat was achieved by Carla's Dreams's "Luna" 15 weeks"- This reads incomplete, there needs to be a word like "for" before "15 weeks" or put it in brackets.
- There's something grammatically wrong about the caption in Gaga's picture.
- I'm not sure the word pictured is necessary in the captions, but that's a matter of personal preference.
@Cartoon network freak: I do have an ongoing FAC currently and will greatly appreciate if you could leave comments there. This is a good list and beyond these comments I can't think of any reason it shouldn't be an FL. Great work!--NØ 07:36, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
- @MaranoFan: Thank you for pinging, it seems like this didn't get to my notifications. Thanks a lot for the comments, I'll implement them into the article. Sadly, I'm quite busy at the moment with other projects, but I'll see what I can do with your FAC. Not promising anything though. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:42, 24 July 2020 (UTC)