Wikipedia:Peer review/List of cities and towns in Malaysia by population/archive1

List of cities and towns in Malaysia by population

I'm requesting a peer review for this page. This is my first attempt on PR. I'm hoping to rewrite this once-broken (and severely vandalised) yet important article and attempt to elevate it to FL-status if possible. It is a simple list article that was modeled upon a similar article on US cities (note the section for "Tables", "Distribution", and "Gallery").

My best cheers, gavre (al. PenangLion) (talk) 06:53, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments from TechnoSquirrel69

Hey PenangLion! A bit late, but here are some things I noticed that could help you improve. I don't usually edit lists, so feel free to take my suggestions with a pinch of salt.

• Almost all of the prose has unsourced statements. I know this information is presented in the tables somewhere, but readers should be able to find the source of the information in the prose without having to dig through the list too much.
• When using abbreviations, I'd recommend the usage of the {{abbr}} template to display a tooltip when the reader mouses over it.
• Footnotes 5–8 are unsourced.
• I fixed the other harv errors, but the DOSM 2022f reference has no citation pointing at it. Either there's a citation missing somewhere, or it needs to be removed.

Hopefully that's a little help. Let me know if you have any questions! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 15:14, 7 September 2023 (UTC)