Wikipedia:Peer review/Luis Federico Leloir/archive1

Luis Federico Leloir[edit]

I'd really like some input and comments as to how I can make this page better. I've translated it from Spanish(where it was a featured article), and have been tweaking it for the past few days. I know I need to add more citations and stuff, so whenever you come across something that isn't verified, you can put (citation need) next to it so I can correct that. Thanks a lot.Ychennay 21:33, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The information in the "Trivia" section either needs to be incorporated into the main body of text, or discarded. See Wikipedia:Avoid trivia sections in articles. A few more citations would be good too, but you already seem to be aware of that. Lankiveil 03:48, 22 March 2007 (UTC).[reply]
- Thanks!Ychennay 14:34, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]