Wikipedia:Peer review/Malwa/archive1

Malwa[edit]

Already looks like a good article. Can be improved further to Featured Article status. Contributions and/or suggestions on how the overall quality of the article can be improved will be appreciated. deeptrivia 06:07, 15 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Very informative. Congrats to the editors. I've read only the first few sections and find that the following needs to be fixed.

There is hyperwikilinking - link only the first occurence of a title.
"Geography" section can be enhanced with more references. The mention of "extinction of dinosaurs" is abrupt. Should explain if any fossil evidence was found here.
"Important cites" section is "fleshless"; can be done away with.
"Famous people" section is by definition subjective. If it has to be there, it can be in a separate satellite article, List of notable people from Malwa and linked from here.

Overall, if the quality is improved, it can become a featured article. -- Sundar ^{\talk \contribs} 04:44, 18 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]