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Mauricio González-Gordon y Díez[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I hope I can take it to GA shortly. I think the article needs to be looked over once good, since I'm not a native English speaker there will probably be some glaring mistakes. Furthermore I'm not certain on what to do with the Honours and decorations section, it's currently half list/half text but that just doesn't seem right. I'm also concerned that the tone of the text is somewhat repetitive: he/his/Gonzalez-Gordon, etc. This is my first attempt at writing a half decent article, so I hope it's any good.

Thanks, Crispulop (talk) 14:44, 6 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]