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Mormonism and Christianity

This article was a failed featured article candidate. I have tried to address most of the objections. Any kind of comment or suggestion to improve the article is requested. RelHistBuff 12:36, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy _t 15:05, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I made some headway in removing the "redundant" and weasel words. I would also be interesting in more general criticism about style, prose, subject matter, notability, etc. RelHistBuff 21:43, 28 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Not much feedback so far from "peers". I would like to encourage any comment. Please criticize it, tear it down, be merciless! RelHistBuff 08:43, 30 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have made a few comments on the article's talk page. BenC7 06:15, 2 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Very useful comments! Will implement. More suggestions welcome. RelHistBuff 08:09, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Here's mine in the talk page for consideration with this section header: ==The Bible versus The Book of Mormon==
This is enough to warrant article segregation into two. --Mdoc7 06:23, 13 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]