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Music of Maryland[edit]

I'm hunting for photos, but other than that, I think this article is pretty good. Does anyone have any suggestions? Tuf-Kat 19:48, 25 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

OK. Just some general problems:

  1. Too many red links!!!
  2. First paragraph of intro could use some lengthening
  3. "Music history" - paragraphs in lead too short
  4. "Folk music" - second paragraph a little short
  5. "Popular music" - second paragraph a little short
  6. Maybe see about moving that image someplace....
  7. Could use some external links

Hope that helps, take care! Ryan Norton T | @ | C 15:19, 28 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

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