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Nevada (Binnie novel)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel like it's been developed well beyond Start-class. I believe that this article could reasonably achieve GA status with further development, and I would love feedback on how to make that so.

Thanks, jeschaton (immanentize) 14:31, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

Lede needs to be expanded. Typically, it should summarise all aspects of the article body.
"In 2022, Binnie appeared on Storybound reading an excerpt from Nevada, complete with an original score and sound design by Jude Brewer." Needs a citation.
Two paragraphs in a row in "Reception and legacy" start with "In 2022". This should be varied.
Keep looking for more information about the book. Check Google Scholar, WP:LIBRARY or your local library system for additional sources.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 06:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]