Wikipedia:Peer review/Nevada (Binnie novel)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel like it's been developed well beyond Start-class. I believe that this article could reasonably achieve GA status with further development, and I would love feedback on how to make that so.
Thanks, jeschaton (immanentize) 14:31, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- Lede needs to be expanded. Typically, it should summarise all aspects of the article body.
- "In 2022, Binnie appeared on Storybound reading an excerpt from Nevada, complete with an original score and sound design by Jude Brewer." Needs a citation.
- Two paragraphs in a row in "Reception and legacy" start with "In 2022". This should be varied.
- Keep looking for more information about the book. Check Google Scholar, WP:LIBRARY or your local library system for additional sources.
Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 06:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)