Wikipedia:Peer review/New England Patriots/archive1

New England Patriots[edit]

As this article develops for (hopefully) FA status, I was wondering if we could have a general review of what should be added, what needs to be changed, and so on. Some of the prose needs a large polish, which I plan on getting to. I look forward to some feedback! Deckiller 03:30, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It seems a little unbalanced. There are 6 paragraphs dedicated to 2000-present and only 3 for 1985-1999. An image of them playing or in uniform would be a good addition. ~~Also, I don't think the helmet design paragraph belongs in the introductory section.~~ Just some comments. :) Gflores ^Talk 06:05, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Helmet design has been merged with the logo/uniform section. I'll get to work on balancing the history prose today. Deckiller 12:21, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I brought the history to two major sections: 1959-1993, and 1993-2006. The paragraphs seem to be fairly balanced. Deckiller 20:40, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

After talking with Gflores, some changes have been made: pics have been added, typos have been corrected, second lead paragraph taken out due to redundancy, and so on. Deckiller 23:00, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

If there are no more comments in 20 hours, I will go ahead and work toward the FA nomination. Deckiller 01:25, 28 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I went through and checked out the recommendations from the old FA nomination, which was basically a peer review by itself. I think we're ready. Deckiller 19:59, 28 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]