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New Year's Eve in London[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like any views and/or opinions on what may be required in order to improve this article to good article and potentially featured article status.

Thanks, Wes Mᴥuse 14:25, 15 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The article has a tone of uncertainty and an ambiguous scope. For example, the first sentence says "...is usually celebrated around the area of the River Thames..." but the body of the article doesn't mention anywhere else it is celebrated. Is this article about an organized annual event (if so, who is organizing and paying for it?) or general celebrations in London (if so, the article suffers from recentism)? There are short quick sentences with no explanation, like "Also, there was no fireworks display for 2001-02 and 2002-03." (no reasons provided? was no event hosted there or was there a gathering with fireworks?) maclean (talk) 16:11, 27 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Oh heck, I hadn't noticed someone started the peer review, there was no notices on my talk page to alert me. I shall reword the first sentence and remove the word "usually". From knowledge, I am aware that the celebrations use to be held in a different part of London, but nowadays tend to be held along the Embankment of the Thames. Indeed it is an annual event organized by the Mayor of London. I appreciate the time you have taken to review the article, I and will work more on improving the article to a higher quality. Regards, Wes Mᴥuse 17:31, 30 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]