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Any suggestions appreciated - I'm looking to nominate the article for WP:FA, and need to know what it needs to get there. Thanks. – Freechild (BoomCha) 10:14, 15 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I read the first one-third of the article. A few pointers:
  • Avoid using brackets in quotes. In the first sentence, if the original said, "to encourage", quote it verbatim and introduce with the words <in order "to encourage...">.
  • Try to write a longer, more substantial lead section. Featured articles often have a lead section of two to three developed paragraphs.
  • In the sentence that says what happened in 1834, you made a mistake in the grammar. The sentence fragment needs to be fixed and clarified.
  • Last but not least: your link to claim club is red. Do you have information on the general phenomenon, or was the Omaha Claim Club unique? The answer would provide context for people who live outside your hometown. Shalom Hello 05:08, 20 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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