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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping to nominate it for GA soon and would like to know if there's anything more I need to do. Comments/suggestions on prose quality are especially welcome.
Thanks, BelovedFreak 20:20, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Comments by H1nkles
I think the article is ready for WP:GAC. I'll make a couple of suggestions but for the most part I think it's pretty solid.
- I'm not sure why you included the "Ten Days" song information from the previous album. It doesn't seem to fit or lead to any further information about this album.
- Watching using a gender neutral term like "they" when referring to the reviewer at Billboard. It comes across as awkward. Can you determine the gender of the reviewer?
- There should be a reference for the Personnel section. Track listing I assume comes from the album cover.
- Did she tour on her own for this album? She toured as an opening act in the US for 10 months but what about solo?
- I note you use the non-breaking space between No. and a number for example "No. 10", when describing chart success. I'm not sure this is necessary. Usually non-breaking spaces are for a unit of measurement like hours, liters, inches, years etc. See WP:NBSP for more on this. It shouldn't impact you at the GA review but if you wish to push up to WP:FAC it will impact the review.
I think that's it for me, the article looks pretty good. Congratulations. If you found the review helpful please consider reviewing another article from the Peer Review page or at WP:GAC, this will help reduce the backlog. If you have specific questions or concerns please contact me on my talk page as I don't usually watch pages that I review. Good luck. H1nkles (talk) citius altius fortius 19:11, 7 May 2010 (UTC)