Wikipedia:Peer review/One Wonderful Day/archive1

One Wonderful Day

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it to GA status.

Thanks, Akcvtt (talk) 00:38, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Comments by Bradley0110

• File:DH One Wonderful Day.png has a weak fair-use rationale and does not have a proper purpose of use listed. All it shows is Brenda Strong looking like Brenda Strong. I would just remove it and add the free-use File:BrendaStrong.jpg to the article.
• The lead should have an indication of critical opinion.
• "The desert scenes with Mike and Paul were filmed at a gravel pit composed of old sea bed in Simi Valley." It's not clear to me what "a gravel pit composed of old sea bed" is.
• Can you incorporate more critical reviews into the Reception section? As it was the season finale, I'm sure it was covered by more publications than just Entertainment Weekly.
• Why is there a retrieval date on reference 4, an audio commentary?

Bradley0110 (talk) 19:05, 8 November 2011 (UTC)