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Pedro Castillo[edit]

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Listed this article to remove any errors and determine a more accurate quality class. Interest in Castillo is growing regarding his controversial rise from elementary school teacher to president of Peru. Due to the polarized politics in Peru's recent election, it is important to have more users involved in monitoring the article's substance and quality to make it appropriate for Wikipedia.

Thank you, WMrapids (talk) 23:54, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This a really well done article. One thing I noticed was a lot of abbreviations that don't appear to be explained or state the long-form phrase. It might be better to just write the long-forms instead of the abbreviations in order to minimize confusion for readers. ––FORMALDUDE^(talk) 07:24, 17 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Jr8825[edit]

Thanks for your work on this one, @WMrapids:. Today I copy-edited up to and including the first round of the presidential election. I'll try to get round to the rest shortly. Overall it's pretty good, and my changes have just been related to style/flow/weak translations of the Spanish sources. The only comment I have in particular is that it does tend to stray a little too much into story-like reporting, particularly with excess details (see WP:NOTNEWS). I think I've mostly addressed this in the sections I've worked on though. Thanks again for your hard work! Jr8825 • Talk 21:55, 3 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Jr8825: Sometimes edits can get pretty detailed, but I'm someone who doesn't like to leave anything out of articles. Anyways, thank you for your help!--WMrapids (talk) 03:40, 4 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]