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Rant (The Futureheads album)[edit]

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I've rewritten the article from scratch thanks to interviews describing the making of the album and with critical reception. I'm still learning how to contribute effectively on Wikipedia, and I wonder what kind of article status this can get.

I'm looking forward to your reviews. Thanks, Cryoclaste (talk) 12:27, 12 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

In general I don't have much to add. Only a couple of comments:

In accordance to Wikipedia:Lead the lead should summarise the entire article. The lead here seems a little short, and could be expanded.
It is unclear where the quote in the 'Background' section comes from. Could you please add a citation to make this clearer?

Hope this helps. CSJJ104 (talk) 13:07, 20 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you CSJJ104 for your feedback,

I've clarified where the quote in the 'Background' section came from, as the whole paragraph relies on the same source.

I've also expanded the lead a bit, re-contextualising this release in the band's whole career.

I'll try improving the article every once in a while now.

Thank you, Cryoclaste (talk) 12:01, 21 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]