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I've listed this article for peer review because I am currently working to bring this stub to GA.

Thanks, — VORTEX³⁴²⁷ (Talk!) 06:53, 12 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comments after a skim:

This article isn't a stub anymore, so I have updated its rating.
The "Personal life" section is a little choppy because it has a lot of short sentences with little connection to eachother. I suggest merging this section to the "Biography" section, expanding it, or editing it to make it flow better.
Suggest archiving the websites in the "References" section using the IABot by going here: [1]
Suggest incorporating the sources in the "Further reading" section into the article as sources.

Overall, I do not see any big issues with the article and I think this might be ready for a GAN. Z1720 (talk) 19:11, 13 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]