Wikipedia:Peer review/Real Madrid Baloncesto/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because it's a solid B class article , and want to improve it.

Thanks, Saudi9999 06:53, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

First of all, I've re-rated it to start on all of the WikiProject's quality scales. It contains hardly any text, for starters.

Can the image be used on all of these different articles? The fair-use rationale doesn't even specify which article it shouldn't be used in.
The "Major trophies" section needs to includes endashes instead of slashes for seasons and needs more referencing.
The "Current squad 2007/08" section should be renamed to just "Current squad" - doesn't really need "2007/08" on the end. The section should give a date so we know how up to date it is. And the source needs to be placed as a reference.
The "Famous players" section seems a bit.. blank. Maybe it could give some former players, including a criteria for their addition?
The box should be removed from the "Notes and references" section, per WP:CITE#Citation templates.
The "External links" section needs cutting down per WP:EL.
Then I notice that's all of it. Where is the text? The only text is in the lead. Surely this club has a history!

Needs a lot of work, and the lack of text is why I have downgraded it. Mattythewhite 10:17, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 19:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]