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Royal Grammar School Worcester

Would welcome feedback on this page. I think that we have managed to create a reasonably well balanced and pretty stylish page, but would welcome the views of other users, and their suggestions. Wisden17 20:44, 10 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Lead is too short. AndyZ 21:50, 10 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Lead is too short.
"The Perrins Hall is arguably the finest building". Weasel terms. Atribute this opinion to someone notable, or failing that, better remove it from the article.
What about information on the school today? It would also be nice to include more info on the documents that state the school's origin. JoaoRicardo^talk 21:17, 11 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]