Wikipedia:Peer review/Selected Ambient Works 85–92/archive1

Selected Ambient Works 85–92

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to GA status.

Thanks, Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 13:37, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

• Last paragraph of the "Music" section needs a citation  Done Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 11:39, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
• "James also suggested that it represented a sigil." Needs a citation  Removed altogether, couldn't find any sources confirming this. Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 14:32, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
• The reception sections uses the "X said Y" pattern a lot and also uses a lot of quotes. I suggest reading WP:RECEPTION and reworking this section.
• "All tracks are written by Richard D. James" Needs a citation  Already done Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 14:32, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
• The Personnel section is quite short. I suggest expanding this.  Not done Liner notes say that only James was involved with the writing and production of the album. Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 16:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
• What makes Lanner Chronicle a reliable source?  Removed Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 16:26, 20 March 2024 (UTC)

Those are my thoughts. Z1720 (talk) 19:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)