Wikipedia:Peer review/Selena albums discography/archive2

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to nominate it at FLC.

Thanks, Jona ^{talk to me} 19:16, 9 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The lead contains much of the information in the rest of the list. I'm not really sure what purpose is served by duplicating so many of the chart positions and certifications.
"The recording spent 13 nonconsecutive weeks on the Top Latin Albums Catalog chart since 1997." - "has spent" or "from 1997 to [date]".
"On March 31, 1995, Selena was murdered by Yolanda Saldívar, a friend and ex-employer for her boutiques." - former employee of her boutiques?
The paragraph breaks seem completely random
Dreaming of You seems to have charted and been certified in numerous countries worldwide yet there are only 3 US charts and a Canadian chart listed for this album. The same is true for La Leyenda and possibly others (I haven't checked them all). Yomangani ^talk 22:34, 27 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]