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Stade Français

Any suggestions that could help develop this article would be greatly appreciated. I already plan on referencing properly, and adding a lot more citations in. Cheers. Cvene64 08:51, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Obviously the referencing is an issue as you've noted - there are lots of 'weasel words' which will benefit from citations.
You might want to create an article on Max Guazzini or delink his name.
There are references to 'the south' but no explanation to what this means, what the connection to the south is etc.
There is a sudden name change to Paris Rugby halfway through, again with no explanation
'Jonny Wilkinson even made an appearance at Town Hall' - should that be 'the town hall' or is Town Hall a locale associated with the club (in which case it needs explanation)?
I made some copy edits for readability - Yomangani 12:07, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the help. Cvene64 02:59, 20 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 15:32, 21 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I'm a French Stade Français fan and I took the liberty of working on your contribution. I hope you won't mind... :¬) I removed the following sentence: "Stade still captured the French championship, sitting at the top of the league table." The "phases finales" as we called the knock-out phases are what matter here here. Finishing first of the regular season is irrelevant in France and it doesn't appear on records. Only the winner of the final can be said to hold the French championship. I added a couple of things about recent history (how the players got rid of their coach in 2000, e.g.). I also took care of this North/South stuff underlined by Yomangani. Tell me what you think. Take it all out if you think it's irrelevant.
I also have a couple of suggestions: Stade Français is first and foremost a "multisports" club (22 sections including sailing and bridge!). It was first an athletics club (many Olympic medallists, including Marie-José Pérec) and also had a fairly successful football side in the 60s-80s. I think a disambiguation page and a change of the article's name (to Stade—Français_CASG) is needed. I'm of course ready to contribute an article on Stade Français (the multisports one). The same is true of Racing Club de France, another multisports club, also famous for its athletics and football sections, whose rugby section merged with US Metro a few years back. I'm going to add a few lines about this in the Racing Club de France article.

That's it! I look forward to hearing from you. All the best from Beru91 13:51, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]