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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take the article to GA status.

Thanks, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:35, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments quick ones from the lead...

Can't use that image, it doesn't have a fair use rationale for inclusion in this page.
"born: August 28" no need for colon.
Check date, year ranges etc use an en-dash per WP:DASH.
"an Grenadian American" do you mean "a Grenadian-American"?
"She is mostly known for her appearance " mostly? prove it.
At this point it's clear to me you need a copyedit from WP:LOCE.
Four dab links including "spin off", "plus size" x2 and "cosmetic".
"pop off" or "pop-off"?
"After years season two aired"... ouch. Really need a proper copyedit.

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:35, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]