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The Lazys[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because…

I want to make sure it is the sort of article that Wikipedia wants. I was a bit concerned that sections of "The JD Set" paragraph may not meet these requirements (it may seem too much like an advertisement for a little garage band, when it is actually an up-and-coming band that won the JD Set award for the best live band in Australia). Thanks, Luke LJStapley LJStapley (talk) 12:11, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I'm concerned that the article does not pass notability requirements. They meet none of the criteria (does not pass #9 as the "JD set" is a syndicated competition to promote Jack Daniels in regional areas.) The "faster louder" web site is not a reliable source as it is an extended "blog" site — besides the coverage is only of a live date. The Sydney Morning Herald article has nothing to do with The Lazys and should be removed. Unless you can find a reliable source (national newspapers discussing band/their album etc) then this article may be deleted. I'm pre-emptively moving the content to your user page. Try to find a reliable source unless I will nominate this article for deletion shortly. Sorry. Sillyfolkboy (talk) 03:30, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]