Wikipedia:Peer review/University of Illinois Observatory/archive1
University of Illinois Observatory[edit]
Looking for review help to get this to GA or FA status. A mcmurray 02:12, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
- The lead doesn't do the article justice (in size), also the exact adress has to go (unencyclopedic). "housed in the Observatory building" makes no sense, how can a building be inside another building? Can "Other discoveries" be converted to prose? Also I didnt catch any information regarding why it closed and if it was replaced by another observatory. Thanks. - Tutmosis 17:10, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the tips so far, I have made a few changes but have noticed more that need to be made. A mcmurray 09:43, 5 November 2006 (UTC)