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Virgin Atlantic Flight 024[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because this article isn't perfect and I, as the author of it, don't have a very good english knowledge. I don't want to t^nominate it for something, just want to improve it, as it has not a really high quality now.

Thanks, Rich Flight22 (talk) 10:29, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720[edit]

If you are looking for someone to improve the spelling and grammar, I suggest putting in a request at WP:GOCE. The article could also use additional information: more sources for the article can be found at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org, doaj.org and your local library system. Z1720 (talk) 14:55, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from RecycledPixels[edit]

At a first glance without considering copyediting issues, which are substantial, I am most concerned with this article's ability to survive a notability challenge. As much as I am a fan of the subject matter, in its current state, without performing independent research, I would probably not oppose a nomination for deletion at WP:AFD. More work is needed at this point. RecycledPixels (talk) 07:49, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

OK Rich Flight22 (talk) 09:29, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]