Wikipedia:Peer review/Will Eisner/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because as the creator of the Spirit, Eisner's contributions to the comics industry are highly important, and this article could easily be a GA or higher with some work. There are plenty of sourcing issues (see all the CN templates). Any suggestions you can provide would be helpful (where to look, any books you know of). Anything else you think this article needs to really help it shine, be bold and speak up.
Thanks, BOZ (talk) 12:20, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
- Redtigerxyz's review
- GA concerns
- Write "fair use rationale"s for copyrighted images. IMO, an image of The Spirit, should be included with fair use rationale
- Most facts and figures are uncited in this article. All years, dates (numeric facts) need references. Wikipedia:Good article criteria says "it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons". Almost every sentence in "Awards and honors" needs a ref. "Early life and career" is already tagged
- "He is considered one of the most important contributors to the development of the medium and is known for the cartooning studio he founded; for his highly influential series The Spirit" The language here can be considered flowery. Such claims of importance need a reference
- In death, I see "Eisner was survived by his wife, Ann Weingarten Eisner, and their son, John." When did he marry? Have a son and a daughter
- "the son of Jewish immigrants" - names please.
- The main obstacle for a GA is lack of sufficient references. --Redtigerxyz Talk 06:20, 11 July 2009 (UTC)