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Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because... This article is really close to fulfilling the FA criteria. I would've put it up for FAC right away but knowing the past four attempts from two years ago I wanted to find all of the ways I could possibly improve the article beforehand. I will keep this open for at most three weeks before closing.

Thanks, Realmaxxver (talk) 19:45, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Bon courage

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  • Concerning the Lancet case report, we say "Utermohlen's self-portraits first gained attention after they were described in The Lancet's 2001 case report." Yet the first source cited does not verify this, and the second states a "stir" was caused by an exhibition, This is mirrored in the lede.