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Zahir al-Umar[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to prepare it for Featured Article candidacy in the near future. The article recently passed its GA nomination. The main thing I'm looking for is a pair of fresh eyes who could help identify any potential obstacles to passing the FAC (MoS mistakes, grammar and flow, issues with comprehensiveness or neutrality, incomplete lead). Note that I will begin the process of converting the citations to Harvard refs very soon. I also need to need to add alt text to the images. To be honest, once that is done, I believe the article will be ready for FAC, but this is why I think another pair of eyes would be greatly beneficial. I will continue to add or change content, and have recently and currently been working on improving many of the articles related to the subject of Zahir al-Umar.

Thanks, Al Ameer (talk) 00:20, 24 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments. Oops, the Milhist bot doesn't seem to be working. I've now added this manually to our announcements template. I'll have a look soon. - Dank (push to talk) 03:14, 16 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I copyedited down to Rule and skimmed the rest. I don't think prose problems will be a stopper at FAC, although I'd recommend adding this to the WP:GOCE's request page. - Dank (push to talk) 23:54, 17 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]