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SoNoLita[edit]

New user. Any thoughts or suggestions?

DoctorOm (talk) 01:08, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Consider adding an infobox, if you can. Also, I think you need to work on adding more links to other Wikipedia articles as well. Finally, you might want to look at adding more reliable references in addition to the references you already have. Other than that though, I think the article is notable enough, but you need the references to prove that. Thank you. Chevy monte carlo 05:36, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, consider adding a single reference from a WP:reliable source that mentions SoNoLita, since the article has nothing of the sort at this moment. There are no Google hits for the term (except for your article) and the refs you put in to "sonolita.com" redirect to the article itself. Beyond My Ken (talk) 08:32, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of meetings of the United States President and the Pope[edit]

This is a page which I created in August which still needs to be reviewed. Thanks for your time!

Mtminchi08 (talk) 03:44, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent list; nice job with the formatting and references! I'll remove the 'Unreviewed' tag for you, at last! ;-) Chevy monte carlo 05:32, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Much appreciated. Mtminchi08 (talk) 05:57, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arun_Kumar_Khatwani[edit]

ArunKumarKhatwani (talk) 08:43, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You can't have an article in Wikipedia unless you are notable, and you can't write an article about yourself. I've moved your "article" back to your userspace, here. Beyond My Ken (talk) 08:57, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Repeated attempts have been made to create this article under various names. Please see Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Arunkhatwani. Favonian (talk) 19:16, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I was unaware. Beyond My Ken (talk) 20:01, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

User:Pradyumna_k_m/Enter_your_new_article_name_here[edit]

Unable to change name of article to "Perlman syndrome", it remains as "...wiki/User:Pradyumna_k_m/Enter_your_new_article_name_here"

Pradyumna k m (talk) 09:07, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've moved the article to User:Pradyumna k m/Perlman syndrome. If you want to move it into mainspace, try now, just enter "Perlman syndrome" (without quote marks) into the move box. Beyond My Ken (talk) 16:01, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

User:Paulworks/John_Gross_(musician)[edit]

This article is about an American Jazz musician who I saw referenced in several wiki pages but did not have a wikipedia entry himself. This is my first article. Since my first draft I have made several edits based on the wikipedia guides and existing pages for other musicians and now would appreciate any feedback and if you think it is ready to request a move. Thanks for your time.

Paulworks (talk) 18:32, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

S.A.VIJAY_PADMARAJA[edit]

Hi, thanks for taking your time off to review this article, I was wondering if you can please check this article and verify because only after that will I be able to add more details and links. BTW the article is about the person who is currently an active contributing member of science. Thank you

p.s.: the links are within the article itself that direct you to published pages where the person has been highlighted against his work.

Vpr2noir (talk) 18:48, 16 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]