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Madan : Telugu Film Director[edit]

Rkkotha (talk) 01:45, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There are no references to reliable sources e.g. newspapers, etc - and those are essential, see WP:VRS.

For help with how to add them, see WP:REFB. Chzz ► 14:29, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sarah MacDonald (Musician)[edit]

I would like someone to look at this new page. It is needed to avoid various confusions concerning notable people called Sarah MacDonald (e.g., they are not all the same Australian journalist!).

Mt126 (talk) 10:11, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've tidied it up a bit (see the page history), and added a couple of wikilinks, for example I put [[Selwyn College, Cambridge]] to link to Selwyn College, Cambridge. Please add more (appropriate) links.

Also, there is only one page that links to this one; please try to find more, so it is not an orphan article.

You could improve it by adding a infobox person and Template:Persondata.

I will sort out the disambiguation for you ASAP. Chzz ► 14:35, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

User:Guevarap/Magnolia Boutique Hotel[edit]

I still have to dig deep into research to get hard evidence to show that a prominent culture icon of the last century owned the house. Guevarap (talk · contribs)14:19, 23 October 2010 UTC

You have edited both User:Guevarap/Magnolia Boutique Hotel and the live article Magnolia Boutique Hotel.

I assume you want to fix the live article.

The references need to be placed in-line, within the body text; please see WP:REFB.

Also, please add more details to the references - the name of the publisher, the author, and the date. Chzz ► 15:02, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

AMEC (disambiguation)[edit]

Although I have been around Wikipedia for a number of years, this is the first time I have created an article from scratch so I thought I better get some feedback, even though it is just a disambiguation page.

I have already identified some issues at Talk:AMEC (disambiguation)

Thanks!

Yaris678 (talk) 15:29, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Esther Petrack[edit]

Does anybody have anything to add to this? She is certainly notable and the sources are there and reliable. Thanks!

Zipadeedooda91 (talk) 16:51, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

As this is now in deletion discussion, please see what happens there first - Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Esther Petrack. If the decision is to keep it, then please ask for more feedback.

The main issue will be to show notability - see WP:VRS and also, in this case, WP:BLP1E. Chzz ► 04:10, 24 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ralph Alabi[edit]

I have just completed a biographical article about a notatble industrialist from Nigeria. So far, the references look reliable, buy I would like to know how well it is presented.

Sayo maystar (talk) 22:11, 23 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]