Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 3
My article has been done to the best of my ability. Why are references incorrect?
Aweaver2 (talk) 01:58, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Was missing {{reflist}} in footer. Added. However, your referencing needs more work, please see WP:REF for info. Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 03:31, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
PLACE A LINK TO YOUR ARTICLE HERE[edit]
My recent revision of article for the review is linked with article already I had sumitted in june 2011. please approve the latest. K.John mathew, pastor Origin of malankara Church of God Thrikkannamangal.
59.93.2.236 (talk) 02:40, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
See: Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 15#Origin of Malankara Church of God Thrikkannamangal
Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 03:27, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Please help me review the page.
Bonvallite (talk) 03:32, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi. I have re-written an article about the backup software SOS Online Backup with all the available and googled infos, please check the differences here [1]. I have applied for the review on 26th October but there was a small issue with my signature not representing my user name hence i'm reapplying for the request.
Pearll'sSunTALK 04:23, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Reviewed by Ma®©usBritish [Chat • RFF] 09:37, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
- Tone is promotional, needs to be more neutral/objective.
- References do not account for notability sufficiently:
- Too many self-published references, creates COI.
- PCMag, NYT, Notebook review are trivial mentions/recommendations, not full reviews.
- Wikipedia:Notability (software) gives advice on creating this type article.
Please review this new page.
Please address any problems in the usual responsible-editing way.
I have two particular areas that I would appreciate help or advice with;
1) the irritatingy-visible tags around the photo in the infobox
2) I have a discography, but it's very long. Is there a bot that might help fill in (or filter) the discography?
Catafalque (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
AcademicBusinessReseach: I've created a page describing the British Journal of Management as part of WikiProject Academic Journals. At the moment I thinkk that this is a 'stub', so any advice that you could give me on how best to expand the entry would be much appreciated. Many thanks.
AcademicBusinessResearch (talk) 14:05, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
I added a new article on poet and playwright Sharon Bridgforth and would like it to be reviewed. Bridgforth is an award-winning published author and has had her work performed all over the country.
Thank you.
Thisiskes (talk) 17:35, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Helpful hints are welcome.
Stonnman (talk) 19:07, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Leelabratee (talk) 20:24, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you very much for helping me know how to reformat, do the footnoted references more properly, etc.
Nipporica (talk) 21:18, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Please review and provide feedback.
Jeandware (talk) 22:36, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Please could you review my article and give me some feedback?
Josepemacdonald (talk) 22:57, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Just need to make sure the article is legit. Thanks!
Nikolahicks (talk) 23:34, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
It is about the school on Jefferson Highway in Jefferson, Louisiana.
ToranL7231 (talk) 23:46, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Franspinale (talk) 00:00, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
Very confusing. I logged in first, then made my feedback request, then was told I was NOT logged in. So I logged in again, then it seems I need to repeat my request here. So I do, with my apology if it is a repeat.
Faustus III 08:31, 7 October 2011 (UTC)