Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/"Weird Al" Yankovic

"Weird Al" Yankovic[edit]

I think it's a pretty good article, and want some tips before re-nomination for Good Article consideration. ~ Gromreaper 10:31, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou[edit]

It needs more citations. Some paragraphs have no sources.
In some sections there are some stubby sentences. They need fixing so that the article flow gets better.
The "Trivia" section is short and listy. Get rid of it, incorporating the information there in the prose of the other sections.
I think the discography is long. For GA this may not be a problem, but in FAC you'll be asked to make a selection with his most important works and make a seperate article, if you want to have all his discography.
"Directing career" is stubby for me. I propose you merge it in some other section about his caree. I also think the the "Notable Television Appearances" should go before "discography". GIve us a full image of his whole career (songs, TV etc.) with the right structure of the relevant sections and then go to discography.
Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.--Yannismarou 07:22, 24 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]