Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Annie Russell

Annie Russell[edit]

Hello Reviewers!

Shortly after joining Wikipedia a few months ago, I began to look for a stub article that I could work on and improve. I did not have much luck at first, but I stumbled upon the Annie Russell article, which hadn't had a sizable edit for quite a while.

So, as this is/was my first attempt at improving upon an article on Wiki. (Yes, I realize my IP address is the one that did the two huge edits, but that's an entirely different story). In any event, I want to get this article up to GA status, and hopefully learn a thing or two about the whole grooming/editing process in addition to learning more about Wikipedia for future edits. Thank you for taking the time to read and assess!! Galaxy250 (talk) 05:04, 23 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Good work. I think you should expand the lead per WP:LEAD so that it includes mention of her most notable performances and summarizes the whole of her life, rather than used as a prelude to give details of her childhood. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 08:49, 23 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]