Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Charles Philippe Leblond

Charles Philippe Leblond

I've been working on this article for a while since my grandfather's -CP Leblond- death and would welcome any input and thoughts. How should this article be rated? Thanks. Aeternalis 18:31, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 07:04, 9 October 2007 (UTC)