Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Elizabeth Clare Prophet

Elizabeth Clare Prophet[edit]

This is a request for peer review by scholars, Wikipedians, and other interested parties prior to nominating this article for GA status. BlackSun 21:55, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou[edit]

The article looks to me comprehensive and informative, but there are several problems. Most importantly:

There are no inline citations.
Some sections are full of one-sentence paragraphs, like "Mark Prophet". In this case I recommend rewriting.
You could create a seperate article about the doctrine, and have here a summary of it. The current section is too long and not strictly related to Prophet's life, but to her church as well.
These red links in the lead are not so nice. Delink them or create stubs.
Why 5 paragraphs in the lead? And why the last one is so stubby. Check WP:LEAD to see how a lead should be exactly.
ISBNs and publshers in books?
"Controversial Issues" are also more about the church and not about Prophet. I thnik that you should think what material should remain in this article and what should go to a sub-article or to the church's article.--Yannismarou 12:16, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]