Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Emmett Watson

I am hoping to get meaningful feedback on this article. It's the first biographical article I've written for wikipedia.

The article needs better citing. Try to have at least one citation for each paragraph.
For your citations based on online sources, use Template:cite web or Template:cite news.
Do not wikilink single years. Only date-month-year.
Inline citations go straight after the punctuation mark; not before.
"Personal life" is stubby. If you cannot expand it, merge it with "Early life".
"Within days he was offered a job back at the Seattle Times." Avoid stubby paragraphs like this one. Merge or expand.
"At the Seattle Times Watson continued to write his column in the style that had made him Seattle's best known newspaper columnist." This should definitely be cited.
"Accomplishments" and "Death" are also stubby. I think the last one should be merged. Could you enrich "Accomplisments"? You could also possibly merge it with "Awards".
"See also" goes before "Notes". You could try to incorporate its links within the text and get rid of it.
Are your "References" used in citations? If not, they are "further reading".--Yannismarou 14:56, 4 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]