Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Florence Shapiro

Florence Shapiro[edit]

As an important figure in the Texas State Senate and a potential US Senator, the page should reflect her contributions and relative importance. I am hoping to achieve a GA or B Article in the near future. --Longhornsg (talk) 23:11, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Hekerui[edit]

I have cleaned up the article quite a bit, added some content and sources and added Fact tags where necessary. The article definitely requires work to become a B Class article. References should be added to source the existing material and the article should be expanded, especially with regard to Shapiro's work in the senate. If possible, a picture of her should be added. Also, when the article has more content the lead should be rewritten to provide an appropriate overview of the article. I assessed the article to Start Class and changed the importance rating in WikiProject Texas to "Mid" in accordance with the criteria set forth on its assessment page. Best wishes Hekerui (talk) 11:14, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]