Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Geoffrey Pyke

Geoffrey Pyke

I have extensively re-written this article and I think it is shaping up rather nicely. Perhaps, GA status.

Can other contributors find additional sources and/or suitable images?

Gaius Cornelius (talk) 14:30, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

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• Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 14:56, 22 January 2008 (UTC)