Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Gilberto Silva

Gilberto Silva

I have been improving this article for about six months. I'm sure all the information is correct, but I'm not sure if it can be called a 'good' article yet. I would appreciate some feedback on whether it conforms to the high standard required of biography articles. Thanks, -GilbertoSilvaFan 09:51, 8 September 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou

I saw the article failed GA. I'm not sure I agree with that. I liked it. Anyway, these are my suggestions for further improvement:

• More sources and inline citations. For instance section "Praise and criticism" needs inline citations, so that these assessments are verified. The same with "Style of play".
• Most of the sections and the sub-sections are stuby, consisting of one paragraph. This is not recommended. Merge them or expand them.
• Avoid one-sentence paragraphs. Merge them or expand them.
• "Trivia" sections are no more recommended. Incorporate this material in the other sections, by turning it into prose. Section "Quotes" seems to me listy. I would also propose to incorporate these quotes in the main prose or put them into boxes. See, for instance, Gerald Ford to see how these quote-boxes work or Demosthenes were two different quoting systems are used.--Yannismarou 18:07, 13 September 2006 (UTC)