Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Hema Malini

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Hema Malini

I'm planning to expand the article further and make it a GA someday. Any suggestions? --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 09:54, 17 June 2011 (UTC)

Brief comments from Nikkimaria

• The article is in need of a bit of copy-editing - you might add a request over at the guild.
• Any other information about family and early life available?
• "she established herself as one of the leading actresses in Bollywood." - source?

Y Done --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

• "is perhaps best remembered for her glamour, style, and accomplished classical dancing" - source?

Y Done --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

• What was the name of the magazine for which she owned the editorship?

Y Done --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 16:06, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

• Don't use bare URLs in footnotes - you need title, publisher and access dates. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:02, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Y Already done Commander _{(Ping Me)} 08:50, 2 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your suggestions. Any other you got to say apart from the above mentioned ones. --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

I don't know much about the topic, so that's I think all I'll say about it. The one remaining major issue is copy-editing. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:44, 2 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks again! I'll be expanding the career section probably with in a couple of days, before submitting the request for copy-edit. --Commander _{(Ping Me)} 12:51, 2 July 2011 (UTC)