Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Jay Presson Allen
Jay Presson Allen[edit]
I have written a few biography articles lately, but can't seem to get any above B-Class. I am hoping to find out what I need to do to this one to move it from B-Class to Good. Thanks for any advice you can give me. EraserGirl (talk) 01:42, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
Javascript review[edit]
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program:
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should summarize the whole of the article rather than just be three-sentences.[?]
- Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
- The script has spotted the following contractions: wouldn't, couldn't, wasn't, weren't, didn't, wouldn't, wasn't, hadn't, weren't, didn't, doesn't, didn't, wasn't, hadn't, wouldn't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 11:38, 7 April 2008 (UTC)