Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/John W. Johnston

John W. Johnston

Was a teeny stub which I expanded. Want to see what I need to do to get it to a level for a GA nom plange 02:06, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

Cool, it got GA, can anyone give me feedback to see what it needs for FA? Thanks! plange 19:24, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

Maurreen

The list of names in the "family" section is confusing. It seems like the list overlaps with the body text. Do you need both? If you're going to keep the list, it needs at least a direct introduction. Maurreen 05:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Wow, you're quick. That's a lot of kids.

For the ones that don't have a date of death listed -- I expect that you haven't been able to find that out. But it might be good to write "date of death unknown" or somesuch.

Also, ironclad oath needs explanation. Maurreen 05:55, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Also, please see my note on the 14th Amendment talk page. Maurreen 16:18, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Yep, since he'd been a state senator before the War he must have taken the oath, so then participating in the rebellion disqualified him... I probably should make that clearer, thanks for noticing! Also thanks for your other feedback and fixes! plange 16:33, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Thanks Maurreen for peer reviewing and for your edits! I've revised it to hopefully clarify the 2 items you mention above. Let me know if it needs to be re-worded better. Thanks! plange 23:27, 11 August 2006 (UTC)

That's good. Thanks. Maurreen 21:57, 12 August 2006 (UTC)