Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Lena Phoenix

What I hope to achieve with this peer review.

Resolve the issue of the article's notability requirements
Make improvements to bring the article up to Biography WikiProject's B-Class, or better, by receiving suggestions from the reviewers or by improvements done by other contributers
Get the article's Class formally assessed

Navy.enthusiast (talk) 11:50, 22 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Needs expansion! Please see if anything can be expanded upon.^[?]
Instead of just linking to the reviews, summarise them and use the external links as footnoted references. Be sure to include both good and bad reviews.
As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]^[?]
Please see Wikipedia:Image use policy, I don't think your sayso that Lena sent you the image by e-mail is sufficient. She may need to send an e-mail to wikipedia confirming that the image may be used.
Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), avoid capitalizing words in section headings unless they are proper nouns or the first word of the heading.^[?]
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout.^[?]
Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 17:45, 28 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]