Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Ralph Lyford

Ralph Lyford[edit]

I have been working on this article since nearly a year ago and would like to work on getting it upgraded from start status, possibly to GA status in the future. I think it is beyond start class already and needs to be upgraded by an independent editor. Thanks ejly (talk) 20:46, 21 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Voceditenore

I'd say this article is still very much at start class. The biography needs to be fleshed out and written in prose rather than a time line. You'll find some useful information on what sort of sections and information should be included in a full article of this type at Wikipedia:WikiProject Composers#Article structure

The references also need expansion with more accurate bibliographic information and access date, e.g.

PBS.org, Cincinnati Opera. Accessed 27 February 2010 (rather than simply Who's Dancing Now)

also for the New York Times articles, the titles should not be in all caps.

For a "good article rating", it would probably need references in more scholarly sources as well, but that would depend on how much is available out there. Hope this helps.

Voceditenore (talk) 07:06, 27 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]