Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Silvia Corzo

Silvia Corzo[edit]

I think this article has good information -almost all the available about this person-. I'd like to know some opinions from the team. Thanks in advance. --Julián Ortega - drop me a message 18:48, 31 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou[edit]

An option is to further improve your article and go for GA. But it needs work. A few tips:

You have no sources neither inline citations. Where did you find the material for your article? Name your sources. Make a section with references and footnotes and add some inlene citations.
The article must have a certain struture. According to GA criteria, "(the article) follows a logical structure, introducing the topic and then grouping together its coverage of related aspects; where appropriate, it contains a succinct lead section summarising the topic, and the remaining text is organised into a system of hierarchical sections". So, you may have to create a WP:LEAD and sub-sections.
Alphabetize categories.
Many of your paragraphs are too short; sometimes with one sentence. Trim or expand them.--Yannismarou 06:30, 1 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Plange[edit]

This sentence didn't make sense: "where she also manages its health segments, previously in charge by Claudia Palacios, who is currently working at CNN en Español." Do you mean "previously headed by Claudia Palacios..." also "currently working" needs to have a year associated with it, as it won't make sense in the year 2020, i.e. "who, as of 2006, works at..." --plange 02:26, 9 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]