Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Wallis Simpson

Wallis Simpson a.k.a. The Duchess of Windsor

The article is currently rated B class. IMO, it is fully referenced, comprehensive and well-written. What do you think? DrKiernan 08:30, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

Zleitzen

DrKiernan, I presume! Another strong article. Amend those blue web links in the films section and haul the article over to FAC if you think its ready. Good work.-- Zleitzen^(talk) 08:55, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

• Hello again! Amended the film section. Thanks. DrKiernan 09:30, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

Yannismarou

• "She remains a controversial figure in British history." Maybe, this sentence would be better placed at the last paragraph of the lead, coming as a conclusion of the summary of her life.
• You link some single years - this is not in accord with MoS, according to which it is recommended to link date-month-year only. I fixed some, but I think not all of them.
• Sometimes, the article gets over-wikified. For instance, in the second paragraph of "Later life" Elizabeth Bowes-Lyon is wikilinked twice.
• "that she was anything other than a victim of her own ambition, who lived out a great romance that became a great tragedy." I am not sure if such a comment is encyclopedic. In a biography of her it would be OK, but in a encyclopedic article, I do not know.

In general, a very nice article; I don't think it would face any serious problems in FAC.--Yannismarou 12:33, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

• Thanks, amended a few more of the links to single years. DrKiernan 13:38, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 02:38, 6 May 2007 (UTC)

• Thanks. Link to year removed, and infobox added. DrKiernan 07:04, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
  • You are very welcome - keep up the good work! Ruhrfisch 02:35, 11 May 2007 (UTC)