Done Made some clarifications, esp. to sentence fluency in regards to comma use. beverson 03:38, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Sümerbank - I had NO idea what this article was trying to say. Did the best that I could. The Hippie 22:01, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done nothing to change. Cricketgirl 21:10, 19 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Lenny McLean I worked extensively on this one today and just would like somebody else to give it a once-over and make sure I didn't miss anything. At this point I've been staring at it for so long I don't think I would see a mistake if it was right in front of me. Trusilver 05:18, 13 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done only a few tiny changes, also called for citations. Cricketgirl 21:10, 19 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Cressy, Victoria - Copyedited. There was only minor typos and I reworked some grammar. --Edsmaffs 07:25, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done some rearrangement. Cricketgirl 21:36, 19 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Touch the Clouds - A very short article, but it was extremely confusing to me. Forgive me if I missed some mistakes. I did not know what the article was trying to say. The Hippie 01:55, 3 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Done did a few more little edits, but now fine. Cricketgirl 21:36, 19 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Not done This article has not only been on the list for ages, but is the subject of ongoing contentious editing - can't find any signs of the original copyedit. EyeSereneTALK 09:12, 26 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]