Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Ehime Maru and USS Greeneville collision

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Ehime Maru and USS Greeneville collision[edit]

Respectfully submit this article for A-class review about a ship collision between an United States Navy submarine and a Japanese high school fishing training ship that happened a few years ago. Cla68 02:42, 13 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Well done. Carom 18:48, 14 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support, substantially improved from the last time I happened to read the article. Good work. Megapixie 01:26, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support an excellent article - comprehensive and highly readable. I'd recomend a copy edit to remove the sprinkling of weasel words before FA nomination though (eg, try to replace phases like 'Many Japanese', 'calls by many in Japan' and 'Japanese citizens and some Japanese government officials have questioned' with wording which is more specific about who is/has been critical - this might not always be possible though) --Nick Dowling 10:07, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Support — Excellent work all around, and fantastic citations. My only quibble is that you might want to include damage to the Greeneville in the infobox as part of the results section. JKBrooks85 17:40, 17 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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