Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Australian contribution to the 2003 invasion of Iraq

Australian contribution to the 2003 invasion of Iraq[edit]

This fairly large and detailed article is pretty stable and should form a good source of information for anyone with an interest in the Australian military's role in the war. However, it would benefit from a review by non-Australians in order to correct any underlying Australian POV issues. In addition, it would be nice to get some advice on whether the discussion of Australian operations following the 'end of major hostilities' should be split into a seperate article. --Nick Dowling 23:46, 14 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Not a bad start. There are two obvious issues that jump out:

No inline citations (and very vague references). (This is especially jarring when there are little "citation needed" tags floating all over the page.)
Choppy prose (or not-prose, in some cases). The "Forces committed" section is basically just a list.

I would avoid splitting anything out into separate articles; this one isn't all that long, and what results from the split would likely be an over-politicized stub, if the current state of the articles on the US side of things suggests anything. Kirill Lokshin 15:07, 16 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]